Assignment 9

Burnt Bread

Rising.
Stagnance.
Rising.
Stagnance.

Stagnance.





Rising.

It’s soft and rising.
Time appears to be still. Still and rising.
Still and rising.
Rising and still.
Time and rising.
Heat and time.
Time and heat.
Heat and rising.
Heat and time.
Rising and time.
Rising and rising.

Oh.
It got bigger.
Bigger and rising?
Rising and still.
If it's rising yet still then is risingness still?
Darker and rising or darker and still?
Darker and darker and rising and darker.

Oh. Too dark. Darker than black. Blacker than black.
Darker and blacker than blacker and black.
It's not bigger and darker but darker and darkness.
Blacker is darkness but is darkness black?

Oh well,
It's still Edible.

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